Sunday, June 16, 2013

Round 1 (Match # 3) - Dharmesh Talwar vs. Shiva ji Aryan

 *) - National Animal of India - Ek Hain Tiger

(#3 - Dharmesh Talwar)

Tourism in Jim Corbett part is dependent on Tigers. Tigers are found in other parts of India and help the jungle food chain, many local residents and develop infrastructure by income from tourists and government.

Impressions of his royal feet below,
And I now wonder, where did the king go?
Perhaps he's silently spying and watching,
Somewhere in the depths, the king is walking.

In solitude, he rules, and walks alone,
He is the king, the whole jungle, his throne.
Crouching tiger, moving swiftly with speed,
Look at the marked ruler proudly proceed.

Ah, hear the roar, the timber too shivers,
The flowing river makes waves and quivers.
Jungle stops breathing, the king is talking,
Somewhere in the depths, the king is walking.

Majestic Orange, with few stripes of black,
Emperor of jungles, solemnly looks back.
To see what a creature has dared to tread,
Into its territory, where living turn dead.

I walk ahead, I dare not cross its path,
For I cannot suffer the jungle's wrath.
Till the end of woods, secretly stalking,
Somewhere in the depths, the king is walking.

Rating - 50/100

Judge's Comment - 
Beautiful poem on our national animal. Impressive rhyming and imagery. 

*) -  Bha-Ra-Ta

(# 62 Shiva ji Aryan)


Jyada lamba nai likhunga, samjh sakey jo samjhein.. Gehre mere teer, dekhan mein laghu lagein , ghaav karein gambheer..

Bharat ke samaj mein 3 shabd hi prabhavi hain..
Bha.. Ra.. Aur Ta
bha.. Bhagwan bharose
ra.. Raas rang..
Ta.. Tabaahi
sabkuchh bha, aj e nai, hamesha, chahe moksh , chahe sarkari kaam..
Rasmay ra.. Chahey bhakti kala mein, chahe yuvao pe sanskriti ka prabhav, chahe puratan raja, chahe aj ka neta..
Ta.. Tabahi chahe desh ki, chahe yanha utpann gyan ki, yuva shakti ki (jinki kala ka yanha mol nai, par videsho me hai) chahe hamari gauravmayi sanskriti ki. Par ek din is tabahi ki b tabahi hogi..ye lo bhaiya jaan.. Kahey aryan baat ye sachhi.. Phir hoga Mera Bharat Mahaan ! : $ Aryän !

Rating - 15/100

 Judge's Comment - Hurried, unorganized and encrypted message/article. 

Result - Dharmesh Talwar wins the match by 35 Points and enters in final 32 round. Shiva ji Aryan goes to Parallel League.

Judge - Mr. Mayank Sharma (Author)

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